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The map illustrates the current layout of the sports complex and how it may look after the redevelopment.

The map illustrates the current layout of the sports complex and how it may look after the redevelopment. mbEBK
The map illustrates the current layout of the sports complex and how it may look after the redevelopment. Overall, new allocations to the changing room, sports shops, cafe and dance studios are expected in addition to the expansion of the gym. The outdoor courts which is situated in the west end is to be expanded to be a leisure pool with an addition of a dedicated changing room and a nearby sports shop. The east end of the centre, where the current outdoor centre sits, is going to be the new sports hall with newly developed adjacent two dance studios. Furthermore a changing room and a cafe will be added to the new creation of the sports hall in the east end. WWhile the 25 meter pool and its surroundings remain same for the most part, the expansion of the gym towards the east end could be expected.
The map illustrates the
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layout of the
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sports
complex and how it may look after the redevelopment.

Overall
, new allocations to the changing room,
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sports
shops,
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cafe
and dance studios are
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expected
in addition
to the expansion of the gym.

The outdoor courts which
is situated
in the west
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end
is to
be expanded
to be a leisure pool with an addition of a dedicated changing room and a nearby
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sports
shop.

The east
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end
of the
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centre
, where the
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current
outdoor
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centre
sits, is going to be the new
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sports
hall with
newly
developed adjacent two dance studios.
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Furthermore
a changing room and a
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cafe
will be
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added
to the new creation of the
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sports
hall in the east
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end
.

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WWhile
the
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25 meter
pool and its surroundings remain same
for the most part
, the expansion of the gym towards the east
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could be
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IELTS academic The map illustrates the current layout of the sports complex and how it may look after the redevelopment.

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