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The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. IELTS Writing Task 1

The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025. kdWO
This chart depicts the amount of money made by three sectors [meat products, dairy products and international tourism ] in two different years 2005 and 2015, and future prediction for 2025. Unit USD billion. Overall, most of the money in year 2005 came from international tourism, whereas in 2015 most of the money was made by dairy products. And according to chart most money will be also going to came from international tourism. The performance of meat industry is gradually decreasing as it was 4 billion in 2005 and came to around 3. 8 billion in 2015 and as predicted it will going to around 3 billion till the end of 2025. The dairy products are having mix of fallen rice in 2005 there revenue was around 5 billion with jumped to around 8 billion in 2015 but then it will goes down to around 7. 8 billion till 2025. International tourism is this act officials gradual increase in performance as it started with just more than 6 billion but it will ended up on getting just less than 8 billion.
This chart depicts the amount of
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money
made by three sectors [meat
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products
, dairy
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products
and
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international
tourism
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]
in two
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different
years 2005 and 2015, and future prediction for 2025. Unit USD billion.

Overall
, most of the
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money
in year 2005 came from
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international
tourism, whereas in 2015 most of the
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money
was made
by dairy
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products
. And according to chart most
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money
will be
also
going to
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came
from
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international
tourism.

The performance of meat industry is
gradually
decreasing as it was 4
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billion
in 2005 and came to
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around
3. 8
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billion
in 2015 and as predicted it will
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going
to
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around
3
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billion
till the
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end
of 2025. The dairy
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products
are having mix of fallen rice in 2005 there revenue was
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around
5
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billion
with jumped to
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around
8
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billion
in 2015
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but
then it will
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goes
down to
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around
7. 8
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billion
till
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2025. International
tourism is this act officials gradual increase in performance as it
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started
with
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just
more than 6
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billion
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but
it will
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ended
up on getting
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less than 8
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billion
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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