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the table shows the numbers of weekend ticket sales at a certain movie theater.

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The table shows how many movie tickets were sold at the Springfield Cinema at different times of the weekend. On Saturday, sales were highest in the evening, while on Sunday, most tickets were sold in the afternoon On Saturday, the most popular times to see a movie were in the evening. Sales started out relatively low, with 100 tickets sold for the 3: 00 who and 125 sold for the 5: 00 show. After that, sales rose to 150 tickets sold for both the 7: 00 and 9: 00 shows. On Sunday, on the other hand. The most popular time to see a movie was in the afternoon. Sales started out the highest for the 3: 00 show, when 125 tickets were sold. Then, sales dropped steadily, and they reached their lowest for the 9. 00 show, when just 50 tickets were sold. In general, moviegoers at the Springfield Cinema seem to prefer later shows on Saturday and earlier shows on Sunday.
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