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The chart below shows the percentage of young people at a university in 2000 and 2007.

The chart below shows the percentage of young people at a university in 2000 and 2007. KG9qw
The given bar chart represents data about the total number of young students at universities in different six countries during the period from 2000 to 2007. At first glance, it is obvious that the percentage of Polish students was higher than other nations’ learners, in contrast, the Spanish were the least. The y-axis indicates the number of learners measured by percent, and the x-axis shows the names of various countries. At closer observation, in 2000 70% of Finland people studied at university, followed by Norway and Poland roughly 66% and 64% respectively. In the UK and Spain, 46 percent of students had studied at the institute; however, in Italy, the figure was less it contributed merely 38%. Observing the data in further detail, in 2007 Italian and Polish students who enrolled at university increased approximately 14%. Interestingly, the number of Finland students remained unchanged at about 70 percent. The number of students saw a decline in Spain and Norway around 5% and 1% correspondingly.
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of young
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at universities in
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six countries during the period from 2000 to 2007.

At
first
glance, it is obvious that the percentage of Polish
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students
was higher than other nations’ learners,
in contrast
, the Spanish were the least. The y-axis indicates the
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number
of learners measured by percent, and the x-axis
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shows
the names of various countries.

At closer observation, in 2000 70% of Finland
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people
studied at university, followed by Norway and Poland roughly 66% and 64%
respectively
. In the UK and Spain, 46 percent of
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students
had studied at the institute;
however
, in Italy, the figure was less it contributed
merely
38%.

Observing the data in
further
detail, in 2007 Italian and Polish
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students
who enrolled at university increased approximately 14%.
Interestingly
, the
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number
of Finland
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students
remained unchanged at about 70 percent. The
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of
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students
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saw
a decline in Spain and Norway around 5% and 1%
correspondingly
.
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