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the diagram shows how the Global Positioning System (GPS) works in order to help people find their location anywhere on Earth.

the diagram shows how the Global Positioning System (GPS) works in order to help people find their location anywhere on Earth. pJEeD

The diagram illustrates the way in which the Global Positioning System (GPS) is worked and how it could assist people to discover their position on Earth. Overall, there are 3 of segmentation on how the GPS works, beginning with energy that is provided by solar panels in the space segment and ending with on how people can be located from using satellites. To begin, on space section, there are 3 main components to build a satellite such as energy that is produced by two wings of solar panels. The second, antennae, where it functions as transmitting and receiving the data. The last one, atomic clock on board is kept the time accurately. The 24 satellites on outer space will go around the Earth twice in one day with approximately 20, 000 km of elevation. In control section, before the information is sent into control center, the radar at monitor stations at different places on Earth is purposed to recognize the changing of satellites in orbits. The data from control center is sent back again into the satellites so that the information can be broadcasted to users. Next, in user section, the code data is continual transferred from the satellite, including right position and transmission time in user section. The Hand held receiver, which is for calculating the distance between each satellite, is used to compare the time when it is transmitted and received. By knowing the distance between four satellites is for finding out the exact location, the receiver will figure out the accurate position.

The diagram illustrates the way in which the Global Positioning System (GPS) is worked
 and how it could assist This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to discover their position on Earth.

Overall
, there are 3 of segmentation on how the GPS works, beginning with energy that is provided
 by solar panels in the space segment and ending with on how This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can be located
 from using satellites.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
, on space You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
, there are 3 main components to build a satellite such as energy that is produced
 by two wings of solar panels. The second, antennae, where it functions as transmitting and receiving the data. The last one, atomic clock on board is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 the time accurately
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 24 satellites on outer space will go around the Earth twice in one day with approximately 20, 000 km of elevation.

In control You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the information is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 into control center, the radar at monitor stations at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 places on Earth is purposed
 to recognize the changing of satellites in orbits. The data from control center is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 back again into the satellites This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the information can be broadcasted
 to users.

Next
, in user You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
, the code data is continual transferred from the satellite, including right position and transmission time in user You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
. The Hand held receiver, which is for calculating the distance between each satellite, is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to compare the time when it is transmitted
 and received. By knowing the distance between four satellites is for finding out the exact location, the receiver will figure out the accurate position. 