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THE CHART SHOWS THE NUMBER OF MOBILE PHONES AND LANDLINES PER 100 PEOPLE IN SELECTED COUNTRIES

THE CHART SHOWS THE NUMBER OF MOBILE PHONES AND LANDLINES PER 100 PEOPLE IN SELECTED COUNTRIES XEbkA
THE GIVE BAR CHART DEMONSTRATES A GREAT NUMBER OF CELL PHONES AND LANDLINES PER 100 INDIVIDUALS IN PARTICULAR COUNTRIES AROUND THE WORLD(US, CANADA, GERMANY, IK, SWEDEN, ITALY, AND DENMARK. ) OVERALL, IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN FROM THE CHART THAT THE MOST MOBILE PHONE USERS ARE IN ITALY WHEREAS OTHER PARTICULAR COUNTRIES DO NOT USE MOBILES SO MUCH. THE LANDLINES SHOW THE THE COUNTRY WHICH IS CALLED DENMARK. IN TERMS OF MOBILE PHONES IN CANADA ILLUSTRATES TO AROUND 35 PEOPLE WHILE IN THE UK IT IS JUST HIGHER TO AROUND 14 PEOPLE. FOLLOW THIS WAY, THE ITLAY AND THE MOST HIGHER AND SIGNIFICANTLY THE NUMBER OF CELL PHONE USERS (90). ALTHOUGH THE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN SWEDEN AND UK TO AROUND 7 PER PEOPLE. ACCORDING TO THE LANDLINES IN CANADA IS 62 PER INDIVIDUAL WHILE THE USA IS HIGHER THAN CANADA APPROXIMATELY 8 PER PERSON. THE HIGHEST NUMBER OF PEOPLE ON LANDLINE USERS IN DENMARK, PEAKED TO AROUND 85 PEOPLE. IN TERMS OF THE OTHER 4 COUNTRIES THEY ARE EXTREMELY LOW LANDLINE USERS IN THE CHART
THE GIVE BAR CHART DEMONSTRATES A GREAT NUMBER OF
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CELL
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PHONES
AND LANDLINES PER 100 INDIVIDUALS
IN PARTICULAR
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COUNTRIES
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AROUND
THE WORLD(US, CANADA, GERMANY,
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, SWEDEN, ITALY, AND DENMARK.
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OVERALL
, IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
FROM THE CHART THAT THE MOST MOBILE
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PHONE
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USERS
ARE IN ITALY WHEREAS OTHER PARTICULAR
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COUNTRIES
DO NOT
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USE
MOBILES
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SO
MUCH. THE LANDLINES
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THE THE
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COUNTRY
WHICH
IS CALLED
DENMARK.

IN TERMS OF MOBILE
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PHONES
IN CANADA ILLUSTRATES TO
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AROUND
35
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PEOPLE
WHILE IN THE UK IT IS
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HIGHER TO
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AROUND
14
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PEOPLE
. FOLLOW THIS WAY, THE
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ITLAY
AND THE
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MOST HIGHER
AND
SIGNIFICANTLY
THE NUMBER OF CELL
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PHONE
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USERS
(90). ALTHOUGH THE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN SWEDEN AND UK TO
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AROUND
7 PER
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PEOPLE
.

ACCORDING TO THE LANDLINES IN CANADA IS 62 PER INDIVIDUAL WHILE THE USA IS HIGHER THAN CANADA APPROXIMATELY 8 PER PERSON. THE HIGHEST NUMBER OF
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PEOPLE
ON LANDLINE
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IN DENMARK, PEAKED TO
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AROUND
85
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PEOPLE
. IN TERMS OF THE OTHER 4
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COUNTRIES
THEY ARE
EXTREMELY
LOW LANDLINE
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USERS
IN THE
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