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the table shows the life expantancy,birth rate and popukation in 2002 and 2004

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The given table elucidates the changes in the population growth, average birth per woman and life expectancy at Birth in high middle and low-income countries from 2002 to 2004. According to the table life expectancy at Birth was the highest which was 78 and 70 years, in 2002 and 2004 respectively, in high-income countries. However, it was the least in the low income countries among middle and high-income countries, which was 58 years in 2002 and 58. 5 years in 2004. Life expectancy at Birth, increased by nine months in Middle-income countries in the two years. Furthermore, population growth in high-income countries and low-income countries decreased by 0. 1 and 0. 2%, from 2002 to 2004 respectively. It was remind Same in Middle income countries in the given time period. There was slight decrease in average births per woman in middle, and low-income countries from 2002 to 2004. Average birth per woman was 1. 7 in 2002 and 2004. Overall, it can be seen that there were slightly changes in the population growth average births per woman and like expectancy in high middle and low income countries in the given time.
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from 2002 to 2004.

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was the highest which was 78 and 70 years, in 2002 and 2004
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, in high-income
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, which was 58 years in 2002 and 58. 5 years in 2004. Life expectancy at
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, increased by nine months in Middle-income
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in the two years.

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and low-income
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decreased by 0. 1 and 0. 2%, from 2002 to 2004
respectively
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, and low-income
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from 2002 to 2004.
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was 1. 7 in 2002 and 2004.

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