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The line graph illustrates predictions about how many people will study three major world languages in over a 10-year period from 2020-2030.

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The line graph illustrates predictions about how many people will study three major world languages in over a 10-year period from 2020-2030. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there will be considerable upward trends in the number of both English and Mandarin, While the number of Spanish is expected to see considerable fall over the period in question. Another interesting points is that Spanish will be most popular languages in 2020, but in 2030. English will be studied by students than the others. Looking at the details, as regards English it will start at roughly 550 million students in 2020, then there will be a fluctuation over the four years, at which point it is expected to off at just under 700 million students until 2004. Then the figure will go up significantly, finishing at around 750 million students in 2030. If we look, at Mandarin the trend is similar. Having remained stable at around 100 million students in the first of decade, the number of students rose drammatically, reaching nearly 500 million students in 2028. There will be than a gradual rise to around 600 million students in 2030. Spanish took flactuation around 200 million students until 2020. After that, the figure is to be level of in two last year. Despite increasing sligtly to just over 500 million students in 2030.
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