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leisure time per year of diverse ages in Someland between teens and 70s+.

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The below table compares changes in hours of leisure time per year of diverse ages in Someland between teens and 70s+. Overall, there was a significant difference in free hours spent doing various activities in all surveyed people. Generally, watching TV/Videos was favoured by all people with the most enormous hours, especially teens, in contrast with cinema which people almost went to in the least hours. As can be seen from the table, while teens dedicated the largest amount of free time watching TV/Videos at 1, 200 hours, people in their 30s had less hours than other groups. Although teens spent the least time going to the cinema, it took up the most hours in others. Additionally, a considerable decline from 100 to 75 was witnessed among teens and 70+ in group exercise/sport. Similarly, socialising with 4 or more people experienced a downward trend at fouthteen times drop from teens to 70s+ groups with 350 and 25 respectively. And, 30s and 40s groups devoted the biggest number in individual exercise time at 200 hours which was four times higher than the 50s group. Socialising with 4 or less people was saw the climb from 150 in youngster team to 300 in 30s group before plunging to 200 in over 70 ages.
The below table compares
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changes
in
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hours
of leisure
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time
per year of diverse ages in
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Someland
between
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teens
and 70s+.

Overall
, there was a significant difference in free
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hours
spent doing various activities in all surveyed
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people
.
Generally
, watching TV/Videos was
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favoured
by all
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people
with the most enormous
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hours
,
especially
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teens
,
in contrast
with cinema which
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people
almost went to in the least hours.

As can be
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seen
from the table, while
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teens
dedicated the largest amount of free
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time
watching TV/Videos at 1, 200
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hours
,
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people
in their 30s had less
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hours
than other
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groups
. Although
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teens
spent the least
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time
going to the cinema, it took up the most
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hours
in others.

Additionally
, a considerable decline from 100 to 75
was witnessed
among
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teens
and 70+ in
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group
exercise/sport.
Similarly
,
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socialising
with 4 or more
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people
experienced a downward trend at
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fouthteen
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times
drop from
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teens
to 70s+
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groups
with 350 and 25
respectively
. And, 30s and 40s
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groups
devoted the biggest number in individual exercise
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time
at 200
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hours
which was four
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times
higher than the 50s
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group
.
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Socialising
with 4 or
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less
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people
was
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saw
the climb from 150 in youngster team to 300 in 30s
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group
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before
plunging to 200 in over 70 ages.
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IELTS academic leisure time per year of diverse ages in Someland between teens and 70s+.

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