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The table shows the key data on the demographics of four different countries

The table shows the key data on the demographics of four different countries KnjL0
The table displays data on four nations (China, Russia, USA, and UK) in three categories, population, GDP and life average expectancy. Overall, it is clear number of population in China is the highest among four nations while UK has the least. In GDP category, the numbers are inversely proportional to the population, except for the US, which is not following the general trend. The average for UK citizens life expectancy is the highest. In term of population, China led the table with 1. 357 billion people whereas in the UK, it is just nearly 65 million. The number of people in the US is doubled the number of people in Russia. Regarding GDP, although China’s population is the highest but GDP per Capita is only 6. 807 USD, which is the least. GDP for USA and UK are highest with 53. 681 USD and 41. 787 respectively. For longevity, the average in the UK is 81. 5 years, following by 75. 2 years in China and Russia. Surprisingly, USA’s GDP is the highest but in life expectancy, the number of years US citizens can are minorly over 69 years, on average.
The table displays data on four nations (China, Russia, USA, and UK) in three categories,
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population
, GDP and life
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expectancy.

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in China is the highest among four nations while UK has the least. In GDP category, the
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for UK citizens life expectancy is the highest.

In term of
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