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The charts give information about music sales in a US music store in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar graph represents the comparison of distinct types of music that was purchased in britain while, line graph reveals the sales of PoP, classical and Rock music in billion pounds over the time period of 40 years. It is apperant from former illustration that the sales of pop music in first two years remained higher by earning 5 billion pounds which alarmingly delined in remaining tow decades and went under 4 billion pounds. Nextly, sales of Rock music remained under 4 billion pounds throught the time period of 4 years. Finally, classical music's sales also followed the same trend as Pop music but ever went higher than 4 billions. It further clear from latter illustration that in the begining of 1970's Pop and Rock started sailing aproximately from 3 billion that gradually incline throughout the begining of 1980. While, pop music sales kept on surging and Rock music sales fell down in last decade. On the other hand, Classical music's sale was 4 billion in 1960's which reaced below 2 billion pounds by 1990. Overall, Pop music was the most popular music in britain which kept on increasing for sailing.
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two years remained higher by earning 5
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in remaining tow decades and went under 4
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,
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of
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Rock
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remained under 4
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throught
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ever went higher than 4 billions.

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fell down in last decade.
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Overall
, Pop
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was the most popular
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