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Process of making matches

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The diagram shows how matches are made. It is a complicated process which has 8 ministages and 2 bigger stages. The product is being made by preparing, chopping, soaking and drying. In the 1st big stage there are 4 steps. The first step is to peel the logs. This is made by a sharp blade. After that is coming the chopping process which creates the format of the matches. The third step is soaking in chemicals, after it they are go into a dryer. In the 2nd big stage there are 5 steps. The matchsticks go through a metal duct into a storage area. The stored sticks are inserted into a perforated steel belt. The matches go into some chemicals which are paraffin wax, based chemicals and finally tip chemicals. These are give the final look of the matchsticks. After a drying progress, they are packed in little boxes.
The diagram
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shows
how matches
are made
. It is a complicated process which has 8
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ministages
and 2 bigger stages. The product is
being made
by preparing, chopping, soaking and drying.

In the 1st
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big
stage there are 4
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steps
. The
first
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step
is to peel the logs. This
is made
by a sharp blade.
“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
that is
coming the chopping process which creates the format of the matches. The third
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step
is soaking in
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chemicals
, after
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it
they are
Consider using a past participle here: "gone".
go
into a dryer.

In the 2nd
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big
stage there are 5
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steps
. The matchsticks go through a metal duct into a storage area. The stored sticks
are inserted
into a perforated steel belt.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
matches go into
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some
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chemicals
which are paraffin wax, based
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chemicals
and
finally
tip
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chemicals
. These are give the final look of the matchsticks. After a drying progress, they
are packed
in
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little
boxes.
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IELTS academic Process of making matches

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
149 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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