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Process of making matches

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The diagram shows how matches are made. It is a complicated process which has 8 ministages and 2 bigger stages. The product is being made by preparing, chopping, soaking and drying. In the 1st big stage there are 4 steps. The first step is to peel the logs. This is made by a sharp blade. After that is coming the chopping process which creates the format of the matches. The third step is soaking in chemicals, after it they are go into a dryer. In the 2nd big stage there are 5 steps. The matchsticks go through a metal duct into a storage area. The stored sticks are inserted into a perforated steel belt. The matches go into some chemicals which are paraffin wax, based chemicals and finally tip chemicals. These are give the final look of the matchsticks. After a drying progress, they are packed in little boxes.
The diagram
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shows
how matches
are made
. It is a complicated process which has 8
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ministages
and 2 bigger stages. The product is
being made
by preparing, chopping, soaking and drying.

In the 1st
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big
stage there are 4
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steps
. The
first
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step
is to peel the logs. This
is made
by a sharp blade.
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After
that is
coming the chopping process which creates the format of the matches. The third
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step
is soaking in
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chemicals
, after
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it
they are
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go
into a dryer.

In the 2nd
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big
stage there are 5
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steps
. The matchsticks go through a metal duct into a storage area. The stored sticks
are inserted
into a perforated steel belt.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
matches go into
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some
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chemicals
which are paraffin wax, based
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chemicals
and
finally
tip
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chemicals
. These are give the final look of the matchsticks. After a drying progress, they
are packed
in
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little
boxes.

IELTS academic Process of making matches

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
149 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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