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The table shows the highlights data number of travelers at three major British airports

The table shows the highlights data number of travelers at three major British airports 6dLx0
The information illustrated in the table indicates the amount of people who used from three big airports in England in the period from 1998 to 2003. In general, what stands out from the table three major airports - Heathrow, Gatwick and Stanstead were comparing to their upward and downwards. As can be seen from the figures, by the end of the period, the number all aOf three airport customers had increased significantly. In the first three years, Heathrow and Gatwick's clients practically increased more than twenty millions. However, Stanstead's users a great deal less than from two airports mentioned above. But Its client base, which had developed to nearly 26 million from 1998 to 2001, remained steady until 2003. Heathrow's heyday was in 2000, more than 48 million people a year, while its clients fell continuously in the second three years. By 2003, the airport served more than 45 million people a year. On the contrary, in these three years, the number of tourists using Gatwick had increased dramatically, reaching 69. 7 million. Despite the differences, satisfied customers were always to be found from those giant airports in UK.
The information illustrated in the table indicates the amount of
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in England in the period from 1998 to 2003.
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of the period, the number all
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customers had increased
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practically
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's users a great deal less than from two
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mentioned above.
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Its client base, which had developed to 
nearly
 26
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from 1998 to 2001, remained steady until 2003. Heathrow's heyday was in 2000, more than 48
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million
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people
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, while its clients fell
continuously
in the second three years. By 2003, the
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served more than 45
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million
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.
On the contrary
, in these three years, the number of tourists using Gatwick had increased
dramatically
, reaching 69. 7
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million
. Despite the differences, satisfied customers were always to
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from those giant
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airports
in UK.
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