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Favourite film genre :men

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Given is a bar chart reveiving a collected data regarding the males' prefeable film genre. Overall, as can be seen that, action movies were the preferred type of genre among men. However, human, who watch romantic comedies are few, than others. Looking at the details, induviduals, who love western and science fiction movies are about 10%. In addition, viewers thriller and comedy genres are 20% men.
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Given
is a bar chart
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reveiving
a collected data regarding the males'
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prefeable
film genre.
Overall
, as can be
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seen
that, action movies were the preferred type of genre among
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men
.
However
, human, who
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watch
romantic comedies are few, than others. Looking at the
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details
,
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induviduals
, who
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love
western and science fiction movies are about 10%.
In addition
, viewers thriller and comedy genres are 20%
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men
.
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IELTS academic Favourite film genre :men

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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