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The chart shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia in October 2009 and October 2010.

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The bar chart compares the water storage of 6 urban areas were located in Australia in October 2009 and 2010. It is clear that Melbourne provided the lowest water flat in October 2009. Canberra, however, showed the highest percentage of water storage in October 2010. In 2009, Perth and Canberra were 40 and about 75 percent respectively. Just a year later these cities dramatically increased the same percent with about 21.
The bar chart compares the water storage of 6 urban areas
were located
in Australia in October 2009 and 2010. It is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that Melbourne provided the lowest water flat in October 2009. Canberra,
however
,
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showed
the highest percentage of water storage in October 2010. In 2009, Perth and Canberra were 40 and about 75 percent
respectively
.
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Just
a year later these cities
dramatically
increased the same percent with about 21.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia in October 2009 and October 2010.

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71 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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