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the table shows the expencec per week of a single person and couple after retirement in australia.

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The table shows a differention in between the expenditure of a single person and a couples in Australia after leaving from job. Overall, it is clear in this table cost for leisure purpose of a retired couple higher than all other features while cost for accommodation is the most spending in a single person. Total cost are higher in couples than single person. According to the table cost for the food accounted for 55 dollars for a single person and 70 in the case of couple. Clothing and health made up 67 and 64 of total of expenses in an individual while it is about 53 and 13 dollars higher in duals (120 and 93). However, housing is the most spending sector in both cases that is 160 and 284 respectively. Money uses for shopping by single person is 35 and 70 in the case of 2 person. further more total cost is higher in couples as compared to the total spendings of lonlyones.
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single
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and a
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couples
in Australia after leaving from job.

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in this table
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cost
for leisure purpose of a retired
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couple
higher than all other features while
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for accommodation is the most spending in a
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single
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person
.
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are higher in
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than
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According to the table
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cost
for the food accounted for 55 dollars for a
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single
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person
and 70 in the case of
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couple
. Clothing and health made up 67 and 64 of
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total
of expenses in an individual while it is about 53 and 13 dollars higher in
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duals
(120 and 93).

However
, housing is the most spending sector in both cases
that is
160 and 284
respectively
. Money
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person
is 35 and 70 in the case of 2
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IELTS academic the table shows the expencec per week of a single person and couple after retirement in australia.

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