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Well, I personally find this topic interesting.

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Well, I personally find this topic interesting. A number of young people in Vietnam, if asked, would either have a hard time thinking about what they would want to achieve in their life, or say that they don’t have an ambition whatsoever. On the contrary I do have one, which is to become a world traveler. I want to set foot in every corner of the world to discover exotic cultures and gain a deeper insight into humanity. Travelling has always been my biggest passion ever since I had my first trip outside my city about ten years ago when I decided to make a trip to a mountain with a group of friends. I still remember being blown away by the whole experience. The more I travel, the more determined I am to make it my life-long mission. In order for this to happen, there are a plethora of things I should take care of. My major concern is, if I plan to spent most time moving from one place to another, it will be unlikely for me to have a normal job while travelling is not cheap at all. That’s why at the moment, I’m trying to focus on my teaching job to save up for the trips.
Well, I
personally
find this topic interesting. A number of young
people
in Vietnam, if asked, would either have a
hard
time thinking about what they would want to achieve in their life, or say that they don’t have an ambition whatsoever.
On the contrary
I do have one, which is to become a world traveler. I want to set foot in every corner of the world to discover exotic cultures and gain a deeper insight into humanity.

Travelling has always been my biggest passion ever since I had my
first
trip outside my city about ten years ago when I decided to
make
a trip to a mountain with a group of friends. I
still
remember
being blown
away by the whole experience. The more I travel, the more determined I am to
make
it my life-long mission.

In order for this to happen, there are a plethora of things I should take care of. My major concern is, if I plan to spent most time moving from one place to another, it will be unlikely for me to have a normal job while travelling is not
cheap
at all. That’s why at the moment, I’m trying to focus on my teaching job to save up for the trips.
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IELTS academic Well, I personally find this topic interesting.

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3 paragraphs
210 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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