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IELTS Task1- British Airport.

IELTS Task1- British Airport. Rww8W
This table shows information about how a plethora of travelers used three categories of major airports in Britain over the six years period between 1998 and 2003. As is presented in the table data, travelers numbers for all three airports nearly doubled within six years from 81 million to 158 million. However, this increase is not evenly distributed among the three airports. Gatwick is always ranked at the top of all three airports, with the exception of 2000, when Heathrow rose the lead. In 1998, Gatwick airport, starting from 36. 5 million travelers. The number of visitors using this airport increases significantly every year, peaking at 69. 3 million in 2003, much larger than the other two airports, Heathrow and Stansted. Stansted's visitor numbers also tend to be similar, this number was 17. 3 million travelers in 1998, much lower than the other two airports, then increased significantly to 43. 3 million travelers in 2001 and remained stable in 2002 and 2003. The number of arrivals at Heathrow Airport has seen a significant growth from 27. 2 million travelers in 2000 to 48. 2 million travelers in 2000. That means Heathrow was the most popular airport in the UK in 2000. However, although it declined gradually over the next two years, reaching only 33. 2 million travelers in 2002, this number has since recovered to 45. 6 million travelers in 2003, 2. 3 million more travelers than Stansted Airport.
This table
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shows
information about how a plethora of
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travelers
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used
three categories of major
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airports
in Britain over the six years period between 1998 and 2003.

As
is presented
in the table data,
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travelers
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numbers
for all three
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airports
nearly
doubled within six years from 81
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million
to 158
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million
.
However
, this increase is not
evenly
distributed among the three
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airports
. Gatwick is always ranked at the top of all three
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airports
,
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with the exception of
2000, when Heathrow rose the lead.

In 1998, Gatwick
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airport
, starting from 36. 5
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million
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travelers
. The
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number
of visitors using this
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airport
increases
significantly
every
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year
, peaking at 69. 3
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million
in 2003, much larger than the other two
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airports
, Heathrow and
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Stansted
.
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Stansted
's visitor
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numbers
also
tend to be similar, this
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number
was 17. 3
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million
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travelers
in 1998, much lower than the other two
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airports
, then increased
significantly
to 43. 3
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million
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travelers
in 2001 and remained stable in 2002 and 2003.

The
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number
of arrivals at Heathrow
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Airport
has
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seen
a significant growth from 27. 2
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million
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travelers
in 2000 to 48. 2
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million
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travelers
in 2000. That means Heathrow was the most popular
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airport
in the UK in 2000.
However
, although it declined
gradually
over the
next
two years, reaching
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only
33. 2
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million
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travelers
in 2002, this
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number
has since recovered to 45. 6
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million
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travelers
in 2003, 2. 3
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million
more
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travelers
than
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Stansted
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Airport
.
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IELTS academic IELTS Task1- British Airport.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
239 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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