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The graph below show the number of car produced in three countries in 2003, 2006, and 2009.

The graph below show the number of car produced in three countries in 2003, 2006, and 2009. ox8Yq
The given graph depict the information about numerous car manufature in three diffrent country in 2003, 2006 and 2009. The analyzing it can be seen clearly that, the Angentina was produced car around 166, 000 in 2003. Howevwe, Thailand and Australia manufacturing weee 538, 000 and 737, 000 in same year respectuvely. Which the Australia was at lowest for produced the car. In 2006, the car was manufactued by 1, 180000 in the Thailand contry. Whilst, there was a diffrence approximently 75, 000 in produced the car by Angetina and Australia. The formal year, the car produced by Angentica was excalarted almost 90, 000 in 2009. But other two countries declined the manufactured process of car around 80, 000 to 90, 000 than previous year. Overall, the country of Angentica showed the upward trend, whereas, Thailand was fluctuated in car produced and the Australia repreated downward trend in agiven years.
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around 166, 000 in 2003.
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, Thailand and Australia manufacturing
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538, 000 and 737, 000 in same year
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respectuvely
. Which the Australia was at lowest for
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In 2006, the
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contry
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and Australia.

The formal year, the
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almost 90, 000 in 2009.
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around 80, 000 to 90, 000 than previous year.

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, the country of
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Angentica
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