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The table shows the consumption of junk food in UK per week in 1975 to 1980.

The table shows the consumption of junk food in UK per week in 1975 to 1980. D2ONk

The provided graph illustrates the intake of three kinds of junk food: hamburger, fish and chips and Pizza in UK from 1970 to 1990. Overall, through the given period, while the figure for pizza witnessed downward tendency, the opposite was true of the remainder. As can be inferred from the first year, pizza was the most favoured fast food of people in UK with 300 grams per week while hamburger was least pervasive, with just about 20 grams. Over fifteen years later, the gap was narrowed with nearly 200 grams for Pizza and approximately 300 grams for the latter. The figure for pizza eventually replaced the position of the lowest consumption of hamburger. The quantity of fish & chip started at the point of 0 grams which was the second popular sort of junk food among inhabitants in UK. The interval from 192 to 1980shoved a slight increase to 150. Before this kind of food became British’s most favourite in the last year, their data experienced a remarkable surge.

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: hamburger, fish and chips and Pizza in UK from 1970 to 1990.

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 in the last year, their data experienced a remarkable surge. 