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The graph shows the sales of books at DGM book store from 2016 to 2019

The graph shows the sales of books at DGM book store from 2016 to 2019 LwPbr
The bar chart presents the data about the number of three kinds of book (Romance, Detective, and Science Fiction) sold at DGM bookshop between 2016 and 2019. Overall, the sales of Science Fiction books rose slightly while there was a drop in the sales of Romance and Detective ones during the period. As is illustrated by the below graph, the most sold book in 2016 was Romance. However, they experienced a significant decline from 5000 to 1000 in the period shown. The number of Detective books sold, which had nearly same trend, fell less substantially than the Romance ones, from 4000 in 2016 to 3000 in 2019. On the other hand, the sales of Science Fiction books increased gradually and became the best seller at DGM book store in 2019. Noticeably, although in 2016 the sales of Romance books came first and in contrast to Science Fiction books, it was bigger by 100 ones, throughout the period of four years, the number of Science Fiction sold took the lead. Besides, it is worth mentioning that the sales of Science Fiction books was six times as big as that of Romance and double that of Detective.
The bar chart presents the data about the number of three kinds of
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Fiction)
sold at
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bookshop between 2016 and 2019.

Overall
, the
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sales
of
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Science
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Fiction
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books
rose
slightly
while there was a drop in the
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sales
of Romance and
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Detective
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ones
during the period.

As
is illustrated
by the below graph, the most sold
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book
in 2016 was Romance.
However
, they experienced a significant decline from 5000 to 1000 in the period shown. The number of
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Detective
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books
sold, which had
nearly
same trend, fell less
substantially
than the Romance
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ones
, from 4000 in 2016 to 3000 in 2019.
On the other hand
, the
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sales
of
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Science
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Fiction
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books
increased
gradually
and became the
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best seller
at
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DGM
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book
store in 2019.
Noticeably
, although in 2016 the
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sales
of Romance
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books
came
first
and
in contrast
to
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Science
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Fiction
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books
, it was bigger by 100
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ones
, throughout the period of four years, the number of
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Science
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Fiction
sold took the lead.
Besides
, it is worth mentioning that the
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sales
of
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Science
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Fiction
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books
was six times as
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as that of Romance and double that of
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Detective
.
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