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changes of Frenton between 1990 and 2012

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The two maps below illustrate the changes of Frenton between 1990 and 2012. Overall, there is no doubt that the town had less green and more buildings appeared than 22 years ago. Regarding similarities, as we can see, the High Street dividing the town into Western and Eastern areas was still there with no change. Besides, to the West side of the High Street, the school, located in the north of the town and the library which was right on the left side of the street were both maintained throughout the period. In addition, the hospital by the library was also there but it was expanded to meet the citizen’s needs. On the other hand, we are also able to see several differences of Frenton clearly. The East side of the High Street had a dramatic transformation. In more detail, the theatre and shops which were in the south of the town became a cinema and supermarket, respectively. The Café and park were converted into a hotel and golf course and some flats appeared in the north-east of Frenton in 2012. Noticeably, the playing fields with trees in the north-west and the houses were also all removed to build blocks of flats. Furthermore, West to the High Street, the bank by the school was demolished to make space for a new restaurant; whereas the trees in the South were cut down to make way for a technopark.
The two maps below illustrate the
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changes
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Frenton
between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
, there is no doubt that the
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town
had less green and more buildings appeared than 22 years ago.

Regarding similarities, as we can
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see
, the
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High
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Street
dividing the
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town
into Western and Eastern areas was
still
there with no
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change
.
Besides
, to the West side of the
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High
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Street
, the school, located in the north of the
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town
and the library which was right on the
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left
side of the
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street
were both maintained throughout the period.
In addition
, the hospital by the library was
also
there
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but
it
was expanded
to
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meet
the citizen’s needs.

On the other hand
, we are
also
able to
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see
several differences of
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Frenton
clearly
. The East side of the
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High
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Street
had a dramatic transformation. In more detail, the
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theatre
and shops which were in the south of the
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town
became a cinema and supermarket,
respectively
. The Café and park
were converted
into a hotel and golf course and
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some
flats appeared in the north-east of
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Frenton
in 2012.
Noticeably
, the playing fields with trees in the north-west and the
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houses
were
also
all removed to build blocks of flats.
Furthermore
, West to the
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High
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Street
, the bank by the school
was demolished
to
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make
space for a new restaurant; whereas the trees in the South were
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down to
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way for a
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technopark
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IELTS academic changes of Frenton between 1990 and 2012

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