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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the number of bales of cotton produced by the leading nations between 2004 and 2018.

The chart below shows the number of bales of cotton produced by the leading nations between 2004 and 2018. AgBOl

The chart line below illustrates the production of cotton bales made by the leader nations from 2004 to 2018. Overall, firstly it can be clearly seen that Brazil and Pakistan represent the lowest number of productions of the total countries with prices that past the ten million of bales from 2004 till the year of 2015 approximately when both start to decrease and at the final of 2018 the obtain a modest increase of almost 10 million. In addition to, the other countries like United States and India, represent opposite conduct, in the case of the fist it clearly to observe that at the beginning of 2004 they started with number over the 20 million with a decrease of almost ten numbers. On the other hand, at the end of the year 2018, Indica shows a contrary information going from the low 10 million to over 20 million Finally, China separates itself in a remarkable way from the rest of the countries, maintaining numbers over 30 million and showing a considerable difference with the remainder of the sample to finally finish almost in 2018 with numbers very similar to those presented by or India.

The chart line below illustrates the production of cotton bales made by the leader nations from 2004 to 2018.

Overall
, firstly
 it can be clearly
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seen
 that Brazil and Pakistan represent the lowest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of productions of the total countries with prices that past the ten You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 of bales from 2004 till the year of 2015 approximately when both This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to decrease and at the final of 2018 After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'obtain' is correct. If 'obtain' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the obtain
 a modest increase of almost 10 million.

In addition
 to, the other countries A determiner is probably missing here: "like the United States".like the United States
like United States
 and India, represent opposite conduct, in the case of the fist it clearly
 to observe that at the beginning of 2004 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 over the 20 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 with a decrease of almost ten You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
. On the other hand
, at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the year 2018, Possible spelling mistake found.IndiaIndiraIndictINDIA
Indica
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shows
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million
 to over 20 Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphmillion.million!million?million:million,million;
million


Finally
, China separates itself Consider replacing "in a remarkable way" with the adverb for "remarkable"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a remarkable way
 from the rest of the countries, maintaining You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
 over 30 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 and showing a considerable difference with the remainder of the sample to finally
 finish almost in 2018 with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
numbers
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very
 similar to those presented by or India. 