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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the number of bales of cotton produced by the leading nations between 2004 and 2018.

The chart below shows the number of bales of cotton produced by the leading nations between 2004 and 2018. AgBOl
The chart line below illustrates the production of cotton bales made by the leader nations from 2004 to 2018. Overall, firstly it can be clearly seen that Brazil and Pakistan represent the lowest number of productions of the total countries with prices that past the ten million of bales from 2004 till the year of 2015 approximately when both start to decrease and at the final of 2018 the obtain a modest increase of almost 10 million. In addition to, the other countries like United States and India, represent opposite conduct, in the case of the fist it clearly to observe that at the beginning of 2004 they started with number over the 20 million with a decrease of almost ten numbers. On the other hand, at the end of the year 2018, Indica shows a contrary information going from the low 10 million to over 20 million Finally, China separates itself in a remarkable way from the rest of the countries, maintaining numbers over 30 million and showing a considerable difference with the remainder of the sample to finally finish almost in 2018 with numbers very similar to those presented by or India.
The chart line below illustrates the production of cotton bales made by the leader nations from 2004 to 2018.

Overall
,
firstly
it can be
clearly
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seen
that Brazil and Pakistan represent the lowest
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number
of productions of the total countries with prices that past the ten
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million
of bales from 2004 till the year of 2015 approximately when both
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start
to decrease and at the final of 2018
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the obtain
a modest increase of almost 10 million.

In addition
to, the other countries
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like United States
and India, represent opposite conduct, in the case of the fist it
clearly
to observe that at the beginning of 2004 they
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started
with
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number
over the 20
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million
with a decrease of almost ten
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numbers
.
On the other hand
, at the
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end
of the year 2018,
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Indica
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shows
a contrary information going from the low 10
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million
to over 20
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million


Finally
, China separates itself
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in a remarkable way
from the rest of the countries, maintaining
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numbers
over 30
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million
and showing a considerable difference with the remainder of the sample to
finally
finish almost in 2018 with
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numbers
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very
similar to those presented by or India.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of bales of cotton produced by the leading nations between 2004 and 2018.

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