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Writing task 1,the chart below shows the sales at cafe which is located next to a very large high school. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison when relevant

Writing task 1, the chart below shows the sales at cafe which is located next to a very large high school. o80V9
The chart illustrates the trading of a cafe, its place near to a huge tertiary educational institution. It reveals its data along five months starting from April till August in 2010, with expressing three meals (breakfast, lunch and dinner). Overall, the lunch meal consumed by the students represented the highest sales through the given period, followed by the breakfast meal and the least trading values were related to dinner. For further details, regarding lunch meal, it seemed to get the elevated data of sales comparing to breakfast and dinner. Although the lunch meal trading was uprising in April recorded 28, 050, its data decreased in August to reach 19, 320. However, breakfast meal also gave a success score especially in May where it showed 22, 130, while at the end of given period it had less sales by almost the half than in May. On the other hand, dinner meal was the least values of sales comparing to other meals with slight increase of the sales started in May by 15, 450 and ended in August with 16, 050. To sum all, learners of the high school appeared to demand lunch more than breakfast or dinner during the school days.
The chart illustrates the trading of a
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cafe
, its place near to a huge tertiary educational institution. It reveals its data along five months starting from April till August in 2010, with expressing three
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meals
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(breakfast
, lunch and
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dinner)
.
Overall
, the lunch
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meal
consumed by the students represented the highest
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sales
through the
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given
period, followed by the
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breakfast
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meal
and the least trading values
were related
to
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dinner
. For
further
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details
, regarding lunch
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meal
, it seemed to
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get
the elevated data of
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sales
comparing to
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breakfast
and
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dinner
. Although the lunch
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meal
trading was uprising in April recorded 28, 050, its data decreased in August to reach 19, 320.
However
,
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breakfast
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meal
also
gave a success score
especially
in May where it
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showed
22, 130, while at the
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end
of
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given
period it had less
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sales
by almost the half than in May.
On the other hand
,
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dinner
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meal
was the least values of
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sales
comparing to other
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meals
with slight increase of the
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sales
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started
in May by 15, 450 and ended in August with 16, 050. To sum all, learners of the high school appeared to demand lunch more than
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breakfast
or
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dinner
during the school days.
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IELTS academic Writing task 1, the chart below shows the sales at cafe which is located next to a very large high school.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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