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The supplied bar chart above illustrates the data about what percentage of men and women did physical activity on a regular basis with different age groups in the time covered by the question.

The supplied bar chart above illustrates the data about what percentage of men and women did physical activity on a regular basis with different age groups in the time covered by the question. wKNar

The supplied bar chart above illustrates the data about what percentage of men and women did physical activity on a regular basis with different age groups in the time covered by the question. Overall, what stands out from the chart is that the ratio of men’s activity decreased gradually from the 15 to 44 ages whereas the women’s rate increased steadily from the 15 to 54 ages. Another striking point in the chart is that although each gender group had a different tendency, at the end of the period, both of them were in approximately the same ratio. Looking at the details, as regards Male, this group started at 52. 8% in the 15 to 24 age group, which meant that the figure was higher than women’s number in this age group. Following this, the numbers hit a dip at 39. 5% in the 35 to 44 ages. It meant that it is the least figure in the whole chart. Then, the ratio of men doing regular physical activity rose steadily between the ages of 35 and 65, increasing to just under 47% from 39, 5%, respectively. With respect to Female, the number started at 47, 7 in the 15 to 24 age group in 2010, and this reached a peak at 53. 3% in the 45 to 54 age group gradually. After that, the number went down sharply, plummetting to 47. 1% from 53%, respectively. Conclusively, it is noticeable that due to individuals being in the business world, they may not have found enough time to do sports activities.

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