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the table shows the average band score of Indian students from different language group.

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The table illustrates the information related to the band scores of Indian students of various language groups. Overall, Hindi language group student showed a upward trend in band scores as compared to other languages. It is lucid that, student of Hindi language group in speaking take 7. 3 band score which was least score of student in comparation of listening, reading, and writing although, they score highest overall band. Furthermore, in Malayalam student score 74. to 7. 5 overall band whereas, in listening and speaking there was only difference of 2 points and in writing they scored 8. 6 bands which was second nation to scored 8. 6 average band scores. Shifting attention towards remaining information, Tamil language spoken students scored equal bands in listening and speaking was nearly 8 bands. Moreover, in reading there was difference of 3 point bands though, in writing they increased their band scores about 8. 1 band and they showed a 7. 35 and 7. 5 overall band score. Apart from this, other language spoken people also take same band in listening and reading. However, in writing they scored least bands and figure experienced a 7. 25 to 7 overall bands.
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about 8. 1
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