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Output per employee' and productivity can diverge at time

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The line graph revels the compartion made between GDP per employee' & 'Labour productivity during of 2000 to 2006 present by statistie Canada labour force survey. The chart summaries output per employe & productivity can diverge at times. There was an annual percentage change took during each first quarter. During year 2001 both the high place about 3. 4 & 3. 7 respectively, after that there was a straight decline in both the time graph, in the middle of the 2001 Q1 GDP is about -0. 6 % and labour productivity 0. 5% after that there was some rise in after that in 2003 the GDP is lowest among all about -1% almost. Meanwhile, after 2003 then we a incline in gdp rate more that that of the productivity. In the middle of 2005 quarter the laber productivity is more higher than gdp about 1% more. At the the end of the year 2006 bath are stop ad a same position 0. 5 %annual change compare to the beginning. It can be overview, that there was so much fluctuation occur during these six year, overall there is decrease in the annual %change.
The line graph revels the
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compartion
made between GDP per employee' & '
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Labour
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productivity
during of 2000 to 2006 present by
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statistie
Canada
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labour
force survey.

The chart summaries output per
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employe
&
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productivity
can diverge at times. There was an annual percentage
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change
took during each
first
quarter. During year 2001 both the high place about 3. 4 & 3. 7
respectively
, after that there was a straight decline in both the time graph, in the middle of the 2001 Q1 GDP is about -0. 6 % and
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labour
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productivity
0. 5% after that there was
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rise in after that in 2003 the GDP is lowest among all about -1% almost.

Meanwhile, after 2003 then we
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incline in
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gdp
rate more
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that that
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productivity
. In the middle of 2005 quarter the
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laber
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productivity
is
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about 1% more. At
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of the year 2006 bath are
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ad a same position 0. 5
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%annual
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compare to the beginning.

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much fluctuation occur during these six year,
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