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The diagrams shows the university campus in the year 1984 and the changes made to it by 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams shows the university campus in the year 1984 and the changes made to it by 2004. PrawK
The diagram compares the structure of the university campus in the year 1984 and the changes made to it by 2004. Overall, a major change can be seen in the structure of the campus and some new features are added by 2004. The hostel are is covered by cafeteria and is relocated in the mess hall. Sports arena is located on the top west side of the campus, while the Arts faculty is right below it on the south west corner of the campus. Similarly, right in the middle of the campus, the playground is replaced by commerce and the science faculty. Technically there is not much change seen in the location of the library but the IT zone is further added to it. Admin block is just on the right side of the main entrance instead of left as it used to be in 1984. Consequently, the main entrance remains the same as usual.
The diagram compares the structure of the university
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campus
in the year 1984 and the
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changes
made to it by 2004.

Overall
, a major
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change
can be
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seen
in the structure of the
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campus
and
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some
new features are
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added
by 2004.

The hostel are
is covered
by cafeteria and
is relocated
in the mess hall. Sports arena
is located
on the top west side of the
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campus
, while the Arts faculty is right below it on the
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south west
corner of the campus.

Similarly
, right in the middle of the
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campus
, the playground
is replaced
by commerce and the science faculty.
Technically
there is not much
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change
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seen
in the location of the library
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but
the IT zone is
further
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added
to it. Admin block is
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just
on the right side of the main entrance
instead
of
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left
as it
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used
to be in 1984.

Consequently
, the main entrance remains the same as usual.

IELTS academic The diagrams shows the university campus in the year 1984 and the changes made to it by 2004.

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