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The table shows the amount of money given to developing countries by the USA, you countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010

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The rendered table depicts the data that how much money was given to developing Nations by the USA, EU Nations and other Nations between 2006 and 2010. Overall, it is a perspective that highest donation was made by the USA in all measured years. In addition you countries and other countries had given almost same amount. In 2006, The USA donated 3 times over money as compared to the others, with 9. 8 million dollar, while you countries and other countries stood at 3. 1 million dollars and 2. 8 million dollars respectively. Over 2 years, contribution made by all countries had been increased and reached at total of 24. 4 million dollars, from 15. 7 million dollars in initial year. By 2009, however, all countries went underground slide the grease and made total contribution of 23. 5 million dollars, which was zero compare to 2018 figures. Lastly, The USA contributed the largest amount, at 20. 3 million dollars, whereas you countries and other countries was almost five times less, about 4. 1 million and 3. 7 million dollars. Having total of 28. 1 million dollars in the year 2010.
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to developing Nations by the USA, EU Nations and
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Nations between 2006 and 2010.

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had
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almost same amount.

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, while you
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and
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stood at 3. 1
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and 2. 8
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respectively
. Over 2 years, contribution made by all
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million
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, from 15. 7
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in initial year.

By 2009,
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went underground slide the grease and made total contribution of 23. 5
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, which was zero compare to 2018 figures.
Lastly
, The USA contributed the largest amount, at 20. 3
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, whereas you
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and
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was almost five times less, about 4. 1
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and 3. 7
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. Having total of 28. 1
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in the year 2010.
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