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participation over 15 selceted sports

participation over 15 selceted sports p5r62

The table below illustrates the proportions of male and female who are active in 15 fields of sports and physical activities in Australia between 2011 and 2012. Overall, as can be seen, the per cent of both genders who participate is almost equal. Walking for exercise is the field in which males are most active and its percentage is about 16 per cent. also, females are most active in this field too and their rate is 30. 4 per cent yet the difference between genders' proportion is maximum amount compared with other fields. Water sports such as swimming have the lowest divergence and the difference is just 0. 5 per cent. Netball and yoga are two activities which males didn't do at all and the sports which ladies weren’t interested in are basketball, football and golf. Although, expect hulking and golf the percentages of gender’s activities are almost equal like Tennis or jogging and the divergence didn’t exceed more than 5 per cent.

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 of sports and physical activities in Australia between 2011 and 2012. Overall
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, the per cent of both genders who participate is almost equal.

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 in which males are most active and its percentage is about 16 per cent. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAlso
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 too and their rate is 30. 4 per cent yet
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. Water sports such as swimming have the lowest divergence and the difference is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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 0. 5 per cent.

Netball and yoga are two activities which males didn't do at all and the sports which ladies weren’t interested in are basketball, football and golf. Although, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
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 hulking and golf the percentages of gender’s activities are almost equal like Tennis or jogging and the divergence didn’t exceed more than 5 per cent. 