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The table shows Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2015 and future projection of 2025. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2015 and future projection of 2025. D2bV7
The presented pictorial provides the information about the amount of mainly exported goods of Southland in 2000, 2015 and including predictions for future sales in 2025. From general observation of the bar chart, it is possible to deduce that international tourism climbed over the years while the quantity of sold daily products and meat products fell insignificantly. The bar clearly indicates that Southland government income from international tourism made up 8 billion euros and by 2015, this amount noticed a marginal uplift. Besides, according to experts, the same statistics will upsurge slightly, amounting to 10 billions, reaching an all-time high. Export of daily products saw a significant soar from 7 billion euros to 10 billions, reaching its peak in 2015. As for future projection, the quantity of sales is expected to reduce merely to about 8. 5 billions. On the contrary, the amount of exported meat products experienced a mere drop by 2015 and it is going to plunge to 5 billion euros until 2025.
The presented pictorial provides the information about the amount of
mainly
exported
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goods
of Southland in 2000, 2015 and including predictions for future sales in 2025. From general observation of the bar chart, it is possible to deduce that international tourism climbed over the years while the quantity of sold daily
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products
and meat
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products
fell
insignificantly
. The bar
clearly
indicates that Southland
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government
income from international tourism made up 8
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billion
euros and by 2015, this amount noticed a marginal uplift.
Besides
, according to experts, the same statistics will upsurge
slightly
, amounting to 10
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billions
, reaching an all-time high. Export of daily
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products
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saw
a significant soar from 7
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billion
euros to 10
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billions
, reaching its peak in 2015. As for future projection, the quantity of sales is
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expected
to
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reduce
merely
to about 8. 5
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billions
.
On the contrary
, the amount of exported meat
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products
experienced a mere drop by 2015 and it is going to plunge to 5
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billion
euros until 2025.
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IELTS academic The table shows Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2015 and future projection of 2025.

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