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Telephone used in Finland

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The giver bar graphs illustrate the amount of Finland's telephon calls between 1995 do 2004, In order to the bar graphs, it can apperenly see that the highust call in Finland was local-bend lind which had tho peak at 13000 Call in 20o+ been rising At from 19a5 to 2000 and had the peak at 1t000 calls in 2001 afterthat, it had been decreasing througout 2002 to 2004 Natonal &international had been rising from the fimland's telephon calls for In additioh 1995 which had 6000 calls to 2004 which had 12000 calls Howev er the mobile's calls in finland had dramatic increased from 1 calls ih 1aas to 9000 calls in 2004 In brief, it can said that the loral land line tended fo used decreasily, ih another way, the Natiohal and internationai with mobiles calls had been iherasing.
The giver bar graphs illustrate the amount of

Finland's
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telephon
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calls
between 1995 do 2004,

In order to the bar graphs, it can
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apperenly


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see
that the
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highust
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call
in Finland was local-bend

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lind
which had tho peak at 13000
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Call
in

20o+ been rising At from 19a5 to 2000 and

had the peak at 1t000
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calls
in 2001
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afterthat
,

it had been decreasing
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througout
2002 to 2004

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Natonal
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&international
had been rising from

the
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fimland
's
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telephon
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calls
for In
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additioh


1995 which had 6000
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calls
to 2004 which had

12000
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calls
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Howev er
the mobile's
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calls
in
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finland


had dramatic increased

from 1
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calls
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ih
1aas to

9000
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calls
in 2004

In brief
, it can
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said
that the
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loral
land line

tended
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fo
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used
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decreasily
,
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ih
another way, the
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Natiohal


and
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internationai
with mobiles
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calls
had been

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iherasing
.
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IELTS academic Telephone used in Finland

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3 paragraphs
139 words
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