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The table chart illustrate the information about the sea of fair trade labeled tea and pineapples between 2010 and 2015.it is depicted by the regarded tabular chart. The date has been calibrated in millions.

The table chart illustrate the information about the sea of fair trade labeled tea and pineapples between 2010 and 2015. it is depicted by the regarded tabular chart. The date has been calibrated in millions. mbK3L
To sum up, it can be vividly manifested that the highest selling of pineapples and tea in Austria in both years. whereas, an opposite trend followed by others. Analyzing the data about the sea of fair trade labeled tea and pineapples. In 2010 the sale of pineapples was closely 2. 5 millions. On the other hand dramatic increase manifested in 2015 which was 21 million than in the first year the disposal of pineapples exactly 4 million and after five year it was reached on 8 million. Moreover, in Germany it was a static 4 than, there was a minor rose up seen in 2015 which was 3 millions, however, in first year vending of pineapple was 2 and in the followed year it was comprised 2. 7. Furthermore, 1. 8 and 2 million pineapples were dealing by Norway from 2010 and 2015. Analysing the rest of data there had been a dramatic seen in Austria which was 16 to 48 respectively between 2010 to 2015. However the rate of tea in France it was two million then it slightly surged up nearly 6 million. Nevertheless, tea trading noticed in Netherlands 1. 6 in 2010 it was rapidly rose up in 2015 which was five million. Nonetheless in Norway, there was approximately two million and in the followed year it was a minor decline comprised in tea bargaining which was merely two million. Therefore, in 2010 the dealing of tea in Germany was 3million while, a few went down observed in 2015 which was above one million.
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vividly
manifested that the highest selling of pineapples and
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tea
in Austria in both years.
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fair
trade labeled
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and pineapples. In 2010 the sale of pineapples was
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millions
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million
than in the
first
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the disposal of pineapples exactly 4
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million
and after five
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it
was reached
on 8
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.
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in 2015 which was 3
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,
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vending of pineapple was 2 and in the followed
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it
was comprised
2. 7.
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, 1. 8 and 2
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million
pineapples were dealing by Norway
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the rest of data there had been a dramatic
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in Austria which was 16 to 48
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the rate of
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in France it was two
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trading noticed in Netherlands 1. 6 in 2010 it was
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rose
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it was a minor decline comprised in
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bargaining which was
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in Germany was
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3million
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IELTS academic The table chart illustrate the information about the sea of fair trade labeled tea and pineapples between 2010 and 2015. it is depicted by the regarded tabular chart. The date has been calibrated in millions.

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