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The table shows proportion of population in a developing country in 1990 and 2000. The two pie chats shows the proportion of males and females during the same periods.

The table shows proportion of population in a developing country in 1990 and 2000. The two pie chats shows the proportion of males and females during the same periods. n10aP
The table elucidates type of population in a under developing country and other two pie chart illustrate proportion of jents and ledies over a 10 years periods. Overall, children whose age was 10 and above their crowd was higher than any other group in the given first year period. Additionally, olders were less in 10 years time. in the pie chart, boys were higher than any other gander in 1990. While, Men population was higher than any others. Looking the further details, Children were higher in population which was 25% while olders were about 5% that was the lowest than any other age group's people in the year 1990. Moreover, crowd of 19 to 30 years humans were boosted about 7% by 2000. Furthermore, juveniles whose age was 10 to 18, 46 to 60 year old and old age group, their figure was decreased. From the pie chart it is clearly seen that in 1990 men and girls crowd was 50% total while women's shows only 15% and boys was the higest among all given groups of people. In 2000, Boys and girl's number was 50% total while women at 20% and men was the higest about 30 %.
The table elucidates type of population in
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over a 10 years periods.

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population was higher than any others.

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, Children were higher in population which was 25% while
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were about 5% that was the lowest than any
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1990.
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that in 1990
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and girls crowd was 50% total while women's
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IELTS academic The table shows proportion of population in a developing country in 1990 and 2000. The two pie chats shows the proportion of males and females during the same periods.

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