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London Underground Station passenger

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The given line graph shows data on the number of underground station passengers of London city from 6: 00 am till 10: 00 pm. As is observed from the graph, the highest number of people use the underground stations of London at 8: 00 am and 6: 00 pm. At 6: 00 am around 100 underground passengers can be found at the stations and this number increases seamlessly until 8: 00 am when the passengers' number reaches to 400. After 8: 00 am the number declines steadily until 10: 00 am when it reaches around 180. The number keeps fluctuating until 4: 00 pm and on an average 200 passengers can be observed during this period. After 4: 00 pm the passenger number increases and reaches at 380 at around 6: 00 pm. After 6: 00 pm, the passenger number decreases with some fluctuations until 10: 00 pm. In summary, the highest number of passengers of London underground stations can be found in the stations during the office going and office leaving times in a day.
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of London city from 6: 00 am till 10: 00 pm. As
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from the graph, the highest
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of London at 8: 00 am and 6: 00 pm.

At 6: 00 am around 100
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passengers
can
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stations
and this
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increases
seamlessly
until 8: 00 am when the passengers'
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reaches to 400. After 8: 00 am the
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declines
steadily
until 10: 00 am when it reaches around 180. The
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fluctuating until 4: 00 pm and on an average 200
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passengers
can
be observed
during this period. After 4: 00 pm the
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passenger
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increases and reaches at 380 at around 6: 00 pm. After 6: 00 pm, the
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decreases with
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fluctuations until 10: 00 pm.

In summary, the highest
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of London
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during the office going and office leaving times in a day.
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IELTS academic London Underground Station passenger

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