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The line graph displays how many tourists visited a certain Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The line graph displays how many tourists visited a certain Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. 1kjYX
The line graph displays how many tourists visited a certain Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. The number of arrivals on the island went up gradually from 1 million to about 2. 75 million from 2010 to the year of 2015. The number stayed the same to 2016 and had a significant rise up to 3. 5 million in 2017. The volume of visitors who stayed on the island remained steady at about 0. 75 million in 2010 and 2011. Until increased consistently before reaching to 1. 5 million which lasted from 2013 to 2017 except for a small dip in 2016. In 2010, fewer tourists stayed on the cruise ships only around 0. 25 million. After 2 years, the number started climbing steadily in 2016 and reaching 2 million in 2017. Overall, the island visitor rose considerably through out throughout 7 years.
The line graph displays how
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tourists visited a certain Caribbean
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between 2010 and 2017.

The number of arrivals on the
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went up
gradually
from 1
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to about 2. 75
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from 2010 to the year of 2015. The number stayed the same to 2016 and had a significant rise up to 3. 5
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million
in 2017.

The volume of visitors who stayed on the
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remained steady at about 0. 75
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in 2010 and 2011. Until increased
consistently
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reaching to 1. 5
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million
which lasted from 2013 to 2017
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except for
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dip in 2016.

In 2010, fewer tourists stayed on the cruise ships
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only
around 0. 25
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. After 2 years, the number
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started
climbing
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in 2016 and reaching 2
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in 2017.

Overall
, the
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visitor rose
considerably
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