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The table shows population in 2010 and 2100

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It is clear from graph which has a table graph The table illustrates about the population in 2010 and 2020 Overall assessment population with the top 10 countries in millions during the year 2010 and 2100 It is clearly be seen that country China about 1341 millions population during the 2010. The populated country is China and Japan is much less population about 127 Million this ratio is decrease in 2100 about 941 millions in the year of 2010 the most populated country about India USA Brazil Pakistan Nigeria about the 1225, 195, 174, 158, millions while this proportion are much increasing in the 2100 at 1551, 478, 177, 261, 730 respectively. Further more, the country Bangladesh and Russia population about 149 and 1 143 millions in the year 2010 whereas, Country Tanzania Indonesia, Democratic Republic of Congo in Philippines about 316, 254, 212, and 178 millions in the year 2100 it is clearly be seen that country Brazil is less populated country in 2100.
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China about 1341
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during the 2010. The populated
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is China and Japan is much less
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about 127
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this ratio is decrease in 2100 about 941
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of 2010 the most populated
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about India USA Brazil Pakistan Nigeria about the 1225, 195, 174, 158,
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while this proportion are much increasing in the 2100 at 1551, 478, 177, 261, 730
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Bangladesh and Russia
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about 149 and 1 143
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2010 whereas,
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Tanzania Indonesia, Democratic Republic of Congo
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