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The given pie chart compares many different nationalities and areas in Australia in terms of population rate

The given pie chart compares many different nationalities and areas in Australia in terms of population rate Pk15X

The given pie chart compares many different nationalities and areas in Australia in terms of population rate, Meanwhile, the table illustrates the proportion of the population living in different areas. It is remarkable that from the pie chart the vast majority of the population in Australia is of Australian ancestry. Moreover, It can also be noticed that most Australians, regardless of their ethnicity, are city dwellers. According to the pie chart, Australian origin makeS up the vast majority of the population in this country, accounting for nearly three-quarters of the inhabitant (73%). Meanwhile, Britons make up only 7% of Australia's population, only half of all other ethnic groups live in this country (14%). Followed by New Zealanders, Chinese and Dutch with a population percentage of 3%, 2% and 1% respectively. Looking at the table, it is clear that the majority of Chinese people choose to live in cities, 99% of people in urban areas, while only 1% live in rural areas. The same is evident in the figures for dweller from Australia, the Netherlands, Dutch and the UK, whose urban populations account for a high proportion of 80-90%, whereas only 10-20% of the inhabitant live in the countryside. In which, the lowest proportion of urban population is of Australian origin with 80% while the proportion of rural population is highest among nationalities with 20%.

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