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The map shows the city of Brandfield where construction of two shopping malls are proposed by city planners

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The map shows the city of Brandfield where construction of two shopping malls our proposed by city planners. Overall, the map clearly shows that one of these malls will be built at southeast of the city and the other one will be near the city centre, it also illustrates four major stablishment in the city proper. In detail creation of the first shopping mall will be done just between a north of city center and south-east of housing estate, this is expected to be passed by travelers riding by train as it's just about a hundred meter away from the railway which is also located in between the two establishments. Whereas the second proposed social arena is expected to arise along the south east border of the city and justine between the road and railway, this can also be seen southeast of industrial state. A few step to the east from this small will be the railway while direction to the west will be the main highway. Moreover, the city house for major stablishment having the city center located in the middle, to the east is the industrial estate, to the west is the golf course which is about twice as big as the housing state located in the north of the city center. Road, river in railway similarly crosses through the city proper from south to north and vice versa and apparently intersect in between the housing state and city center.
The map
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shows
the city of
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Brandfield
where construction of two shopping malls our proposed by city planners.

Overall
, the map
clearly
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shows
that one of these malls will
be built
at southeast of the city and the other one will be near the city
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centre
, it
also
illustrates four major
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stablishment
in the city proper.

In detail creation of the
first
shopping mall will
be done
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just
between a north of city center and south-east of housing estate, this is
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expected
to
be passed
by travelers riding by train as it's
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just
about a
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hundred meter
away from the
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railway
which is
also
located in between the two establishments. Whereas the second proposed social arena is
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expected
to arise along the
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south east
border of the city and
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justine
between the road and
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railway
, this can
also
be
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seen
southeast of industrial state. A
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few step
to the east from this
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small
will be the
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railway
while direction to the west will be the main highway.

Moreover
, the city
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house
for major
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stablishment
having the city center located in the middle, to the east is the industrial estate, to the west is the golf course which is about twice as
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big
as the housing state located in the north of the city center. Road, river in
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railway
similarly
crosses through the city proper from south to north and vice versa and
apparently
intersect in between the housing state and city center.
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IELTS academic The map shows the city of Brandfield where construction of two shopping malls are proposed by city planners

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