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The table shows independent film releases by genre in the UK and Republic of Ireland in 2012.

The table shows independent film releases by genre in the UK and Republic of Ireland in 2012. OVL6d
The given table depicts information about how many films of different genres were made and how much revenue they earn in UK and Ireland in 2012. Looking from overall perspective, it is apparent that, there is no any correlation between the number of film is released and the proportion of total ticket was saled. Breaking down to further, 26 comedy film was produced, whereas the largest proportion of ticket sale belong to this genres which is equal to 45. 4. Similiarly, a divergent trend is observed from horror movies and biopic where they constitute 20. 2% and 9. 1% respectivelly of whole ticket sales and the number of film was prepared is only 14 and 1. Furthermore, the amount of films of drama and documentary genres are exactly the same, but the percentage of income from ticket sales for drama approximetally, 3 times higher than documentary. As it can be seen clearly, there is slight difference between the income level of crime which all ticket was sold and action. Finally, thriller made up 1. 3% of sales, romance stood at 0. 8% while the rest of genres represented 5, 4 % of films and sold 3. 2% of its tickets.
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many
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different
genres
were made
and how much revenue they earn in UK and Ireland in 2012.

Looking from
overall
perspective, it is apparent that, there is
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no
any correlation between the number of film
is released
and the proportion of total
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ticket
was
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saled
.

Breaking down to
further
, 26 comedy film
was produced
, whereas the largest proportion of
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ticket
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sale
belong to
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this
genres which is equal to 45. 4.
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Similiarly
, a divergent trend
is observed
from horror movies and biopic where they constitute 20. 2% and 9. 1%
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respectivelly
of whole
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ticket
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sales
and the number of film
was prepared
is
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only
14 and 1.
Furthermore
, the amount of films of drama and documentary genres are exactly the same,
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but
the percentage of income from
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ticket
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sales
for drama
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approximetally
, 3 times higher than documentary.

As it can be
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seen
clearly
, there is slight difference between the income level of crime which all
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ticket
was sold
and action.
Finally
, thriller made up 1. 3% of
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sales
, romance stood at 0. 8% while the rest of genres represented 5, 4 % of films and sold 3. 2% of its
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tickets
.
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