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The graph below shows the number of people who taking part in wildlife survey in Britain between 2001 and 2009

The graph below shows the number of people who taking part in wildlife survey in Britain between 2001 and 2009 MMe3L
The given table chart illustrates the data about the number of children who participated in a wildlife survey in Britain. The years under consideration are from 2001 to 2009In 2001, the figure for adults who engaged in wildlife survey accounted for 36, 000. Then, it increased rapidly to 2, 12, 000 by 2003. After that, it went up sharply to 3, 32, 000 in next two years. However, in 2009, the number of adults started falling and only 2, 70, 000 took part in the survey. Further, similarly, initially 12, 000 of the total children participated in a wildlife survey. Next, there was an incline in the number of children from 36, 000 to 32, 000 from 2003 to 2005. intersitngally, the figure for adults and children remained stagnant in 2009 at 2, 70, 000Overall, it can be interpreted from the table chart that from intial to final year the number number of adult participants was higher as compared to the number of children except for 2009, in which both categories participated in equal numbers.
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in Britain. The years under consideration are from 2001 to 2009In 2001, the figure for
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who engaged in wildlife
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accounted for 36, 000. Then, it increased
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to 2, 12, 000 by 2003. After that, it went up
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participated in a wildlife
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from 36, 000 to 32, 000 from 2003 to 2005.
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intersitngally
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remained stagnant in 2009 at 2, 70, 000Overall, it can
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from the table chart that from
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of adult participants was higher
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of people who taking part in wildlife survey in Britain between 2001 and 2009

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