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The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened kilometres of route and passengers numbers per year in million. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened kilometres of route and passengers numbers per year in million. LWxV
The table illustrates the data about subway system in large cities: London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, Los Angeles. Overall, the most passengers were from eastern city. The oldest and the logest route was in London, but passengers were not the most. The two youngest undergrounds were in Kyoto and Los Angeles, the shortest routes and the least passengers were in these cities, too (11 and 28 km, 45 and 50 mln passengers). At the same time, the longest way was structured in London (394 km) much more earlier than others (1863). In Paris the underground was built in 1900 and per year 1191 mln people used 199 km-way to move somewhere. After 27 years in Tokyo 155 km-way-underground was constructed and per year more passengers used than other cities.
The table illustrates the data about subway system in large
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: London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, Los Angeles.

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, the most
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passengers
were from eastern city. The oldest and the
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route was in London,
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were not the most.

The two youngest undergrounds were in Kyoto and Los Angeles, the shortest routes and the least
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were in these
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, too (11 and 28 km, 45 and 50
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. At the same time, the longest way
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in London (394 km) much
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more earlier
than others (1863). In Paris the underground
was built
in 1900 and per year 1191
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199 km-way to
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somewhere. After 27 years in Tokyo 155 km-way-underground
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IELTS academic The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened kilometres of route and passengers numbers per year in million.

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