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The table shows 4 different grains were produced between 2015 and 2020 and its prediction over the next 15 years.

The table shows 4 different grains were produced between 2015 and 2020 and its prediction over the next 15 years. AP7x1
It is obvious that, the highest grain that was produced and predicted related to wheat. However, in 2015 barley was generated half of wheat, it is projected that production of these two grains will be in proximity to each other. In 2015, the leading production share belonged to wheat, with 100 MMT and second highest proportion referred to barley with 50 MMT. By the end of 2020 however, barley had by far the biggest change in increasing, but it was still in second place of generation table. Both maize and rice remained unchanged with almost 34 and 24 MMT respectively. Between 2025 and 2035, it is anticipated that, wheat’s share of production will stay highest. Moreover, prediction results informs that barley will have significantly increased to value 100 MMT, nevertheless, it will be still in second highest share of grains that will be generated. Finally, by the end of 2035, there is no remarkable change expected for maize and rice, so that in the best condition these two grain reach to 35 and 25. 5 MMT.
It is obvious that, the highest
grain
that
was produced
and predicted related to
wheat
.
However
, in 2015
barley
was generated
half of
wheat
, it
is projected
that production of these two
grains
will be in proximity to each other.

In 2015, the leading production share belonged to
wheat
, with 100 MMT and second highest proportion referred to
barley
with 50 MMT. By the
end
of 2020
however
,
barley
had by far the biggest
change
in increasing,
but
it was
still
in second place of generation table. Both maize and rice remained unchanged with almost 34 and 24 MMT
respectively
.

Between 2025 and 2035, it
is anticipated
that,
wheat’s
share of production will stay highest.
Moreover
, prediction results informs that
barley
will have
significantly
increased to value 100 MMT,
nevertheless
, it will be
still
in second highest share of
grains
that will
be generated
.
Finally
, by the
end
of 2035, there is no remarkable
change
expected
for maize and rice,
so
that in the best condition these two
grain
reach to 35 and 25. 5 MMT.
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IELTS academic The table shows 4 different grains were produced between 2015 and 2020 and its prediction over the next 15 years.

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