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the table show the proportion of income of 4 countries

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The given table demonstrates the percentage of household income that residents in 5 different countries spend on 4 categories of items: food, drink, housing clothing and entertainment per month. It is noticeable that all five nations spend most of their income on food, drink and housing while 2 types remaining reveals the opposite. As can be seen from the table, the highest figure is recorded for UK at 37% of income spend on housing. Besides, Germany and France witness the similar rank to UK, at 33% and 31% for housing respectively. The figure of proportion of food and drink at 3 mentioned countries is smaller than housing by 6% at least. Nevertheless, this comparison is reversed for both Turkey and Spain, which spend 36% and 31% on food and drink respectively but around a fifth on housing aspect. All countries spend less income on 2 items remaining: clothing and entertainment. For clothing, the smallest figure is recorded to France, at 7% of residential income whereas Germany, UK and Turkey all spend more than 10% on this item. Germany spends most on entertainment, at 19% while Turkey and UK spend approximately half this amount, at 11% and 10% respectively on this field.

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, housing clothing and entertainment per month.

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 on 2 items remaining: clothing and entertainment. For clothing, the smallest figure is recorded
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