Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking
1. Latest Topics
2. Speaking Club

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The diagrams below show the current ground floor plan of a museum and the proposed changes to its layout. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

The diagrams below show the current ground floor plan of a museum and the proposed changes to its layout. 1JrM

The set of maps illustrate the current ground floor layout plan of a museum as well as the estimated modifications in this plan. Focusing on the former map, the entrance of the museum was located in the eastern part, on spring street. The marine life section was situated to the south-west corner of the building. In addition, two lifts were located on the southern side and they were big as well as in the horizontal pattern. And also, the craft, a gemstone, a design, or a storeroom to the north of the building. Analyzing the proposed plan, the major change would be the entrance relocated to the southern side, and two lifts expected in a vertical pattern. Additionally, the store would be replaced by the storeroom to the south-west corner. Interestingly, modern art would be added in the museum and on the north-west side. However, the gemstone and craft should exchange their location; further, the marine life section could be on the entrance location. Conversely, other shops would be not changed in the expected layout. Overall, it can be seen that would be radical changes occurred in the estimated plan and many shops can alter their place, whereas it would be a better arrangement than the current plan.

The set of maps Did you mean "illustrates"?illustrates
illustrate
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?first floor
ground floor
 layout You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plan
 of a museum as well
 as the estimated modifications in this plan.

Focusing on the former map, the entrance of the museum was located
 in the eastern part, on spring street. The marine life section was situated
 to the south-west corner of the building. In addition
, two lifts were located
 on the southern Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).side, and
side and
 they were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
as well
 as in the horizontal pattern. And also
, the craft, a gemstone, a design, or a storeroom to the north of the building.

Analyzing the proposed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plan
, the major This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 would be the entrance relocated to the southern side, and two lifts This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 in a vertical pattern. Additionally
, the store would be replaced
 by the storeroom to the south-west corner. Interestingly
, modern art would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in the museum and on the north-west side. However
, the gemstone and craft should exchange their location; further
, the marine life section could be on the entrance location. Conversely
, other shops would be not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 layout.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that would be radical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 occurred in the estimated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plan
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 shops can alter their place, whereas it would be a better arrangement than the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withideadealsystemstrategyprojectintention
plan
. 