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The table reprensents the proportion of weight in two genders in a specific nation in three periods of time: 1999,2004,2009

The table reprensents the proportion of weight in two genders in a specific nation in three periods of time: 1999, 2004, 2009 BgOyj

The table reprensents the proportion of weight in two genders in a specific nation in three periods of time: 1999, 2004, 2009 Overall, the proportion of normal weight accounted for the largest part in all three years. For both genders, the percentage of normal weight fluctuated between forty and fifty. In contrast, over weight people made up the smallest proportion. As it can be seen from the table, in 2004, the percentage of normal weight female and male both were 51% and 48 % respectively. After 5 years, both figure went down to 47% for both. There was a fluctuation in the figure of skeletal people, which were around 27% for female and 22% for male. In 1999, the figure of over weight men was just under a third whereas the latter century witnessed a substantial fall to just under a fifth in 2009. Similarly, fat women stood at 19% in this year.

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 in two genders in a specific nation in three periods of time: 1999, 2004, 2009

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. After 5 years, both figure went down to 47% for both.

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 women stood at 19% in this year. 