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The table provides the data about three types of Economics Sectors to X country Gross Domestic Product in 2016

The table provides the data about three types of Economics Sectors to X country Gross Domestic Product in 2016 M3oo9
The table provides the data about three types of Economics Sectors to X country Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017 and 2018, and compares between an Agriculture, an Industry and a Service sectors in terms of three years. Overall, while the percentages of Agriculture and Industry increased slightly over the next three years, the opposite of this process was with that of Service. In 2016, the overall contribution of Industry and Agriculture was almost half of that of Service. Afterwards, Industry rate increased sharply to 25% in 2017. In the meantime, the percentage of Service decreased by 1%. Finally, the Service sector dropped again to 55% in 2018, however, in the same year the contribution of Industry rose just under 5% and took second place in GDP. In early 2016, the contribution of Agriculture was 13%. Then, there was a negligible fall to 11%. In the end of period it rose marginally to 15%
The table provides the data about three types of Economics Sectors to X country Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017 and 2018, and compares between an
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Agriculture
, an
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Industry
and a
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Service
sectors in terms of three years.

Overall
, while the percentages of
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Agriculture
and
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Industry
increased
slightly
over the
next
three years, the opposite of this process was with that of Service.

In 2016, the
overall
contribution of
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Industry
and
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Agriculture
was almost half of that of
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Service
. Afterwards,
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Industry
rate increased
sharply
to 25% in 2017. In the meantime, the percentage of
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Service
decreased by 1%.
Finally
, the
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Service
sector dropped again to 55% in 2018,
however
, in the same year the contribution of
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Industry
rose
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under 5% and took second place in GDP. In early 2016, the contribution of
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Agriculture
was 13%. Then, there was a negligible fall to 11%. In the
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end
of period it rose
marginally
to 15%
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