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The given pie chart and table demonstrate transport and car utilization in Edmonton city. All in all, while very few people use taxis for transportation, the vast majority use private cars for transportation. In detail, 10% of population use bus which is common carrier and 35% of inhabitants avail of Light Rail Transit for conveying. It should be emphasized that, there are some reasons that people utilizing cars in city. One of the reasons for car driving is 55% commuting to work and 55% people use car for commuting to work. Moreover, 15% utilize transport vehicle for to do shopping. Furthermore, 15% of people drive car in their leisure time and they use car for taking their children to school. Additionally, 45% inhabitants need car for their business system.

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 pie chart and table demonstrate transport and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
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