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A table displays information about rail transport of four countries. Summarize with this information people using rail, passenger kilometres per head of population and cargo carried.

A table displays information about rail transport of four countries. Summarize with this information people using rail, passenger kilometres per head of population and cargo carried. Arp31
A table shows data from 2007 about rail transportation system of four countries with this datas like number of people using rail transport, passenger kilometres per head of population and cargo carried. first, we can see there are on the table which are four countries UK, USA, Japan, Italy. In 2007, number of people using rail transport excluding metro is 27 highest in Japan which is mainly because they also have highest passenger kilometres per head of population with 1980. On the other hand, even though USA have the biggest cargo carried 2820 billions of tons, they only have the lowest score of 0. 3 number of people using rail transportation system excluding metro and also lowest in passenger kilometres per head of population with only 80. Although UK might not be the highest like Japan but with 5. 9 Number of people using rail transport excluding metro, there is no doubt that UK is on the second highest on the table. But, in Passenger kilometers per head of population Italy have 780 whether on the Uk have 770. We can see, in Italy number of people using rail is 5. 5 en excluding metro. However, beside USA on cargo carried rest of the three countries are quite close in numbers as UK, Japan, Italy as 22. 2, 23. 01, 21. 9. In conclusion, the table shows information about four countries trail transportation excluding metro.
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IELTS academic A table displays information about rail transport of four countries. Summarize with this information people using rail, passenger kilometres per head of population and cargo carried.

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