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The table provides information on the expenditure levels of five European countries such as France, Germany, the United Kingdom, Turkey, and Spain based on their monthly household income.

The table provides information on the expenditure levels of five European countries such as France, Germany, the United Kingdom, Turkey, and Spain based on their monthly household income. rY6BJ
The table provides information on the expenditure levels of five European countries such as France, Germany, the United Kingdom, Turkey, and Spain based on their monthly household income. The essential household expenses include Food and drink, Housing, Clothing, and Entertainment. Firstly, considering Food and drink French people spend a quarter percentage and Germany with less than three counts. Turkish spends more crossing 35 percent. Comparatively, UK and Spain are lesser than Turkey but more than other Countries. Secondly, Housing Britians leads all the country. Spain is twice as less as the UK. Turkey spends one-fifth of its income on housing. The other two spend almost as same as the UK. The next are clothing in this Germans tops the list with more than 10 percent. French payout the least the other two countries lie with a minimal difference in proportion. The last category is Entertainment all five countries are spending more than ten but less than 20 percent. Overall, all the five countries' expenses are similar with slight variations in different categories.
The table provides information on the expenditure levels of five European
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such as France, Germany, the United Kingdom, Turkey, and Spain based on their monthly household income.

The essential household expenses include Food and drink, Housing, Clothing, and Entertainment.
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a quarter percentage and Germany with less than three counts. Turkish
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more crossing 35 percent.
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the UK. Turkey
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one-fifth of its income on housing.

The other two
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almost as same as the UK.

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Germans tops the list with more than 10 percent. French payout the least the other two
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lie with a minimal difference in proportion. The last category is Entertainment all five
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are spending more than ten
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less than 20 percent.

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IELTS academic The table provides information on the expenditure levels of five European countries such as France, Germany, the United Kingdom, Turkey, and Spain based on their monthly household income.

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